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Critique by adambatista Sep 14, 2012, 3:08:56 PM
Gostei bastante dos traços e brilho. Achei atraente em primeira vista, e após observar melhor, pude notar detalhes a mais, o que eu acho uma coisa boa.

As asas ficaram bem detalhadas, dando um toque mais real ao estilo da arte, enquanto isso, a postura, o “movimento” e os cabelos (envolvendo os detalhes dos dedos e orelhas) deram uma essência a mais de realidade ao traço – sem contar que o brilho tornou tudo mais atraente, aumento ao meu ver, o impacto da arte.

Indo para o 'background' da arte, creio que poderia ter ficado melhor caso tivesse galhos a mais e mais nítidos, não muitos, talvez apenas um tronco, é que ao meu ver, uma pedra distante dos demais tornaria algo simbólico do que real; porém, ao invés de dar quatro estrelas em visão, existe outro ponto de vista, que vou explicar mais abaixo.

Continuando no 'background', apenas citei que deveria acrescentar, pois, acho que a falta de nitidez e o foco no personagem ficaram ótimos.

Achei bem interessante os traços da pedra em volta, aquelas “plantas” achei bem detalhes e incríveis, mesmo achando que elas poderiam ter ficado melhor com um contorno mais escuro ou mais voltado para o “fechamento na pedra”.

Então, voltando a segunda hipótese, onde mencione a distância da pedra sobre os demais tema na arte, creio eu que tenha algo relacionado ao seu olhar triste, algo a ver com a solidão ou morte do ser misterioso que vai em direção ao céu.

Agora que mencionei a face triste da personagem, vou admitir que achei magnifico. De fato não gostei da face tristonha, mas ficou perfeita, aumentando ainda mais a realidade dos traços. Acho que, a face dela é o climax desta obra, dando enfase a sua tristeza ou algo do gênero, o que ao mesmo tempo aumento o brilho e realçou os traços da obra.

Parabéns.


Pós-critica: achei maravilho sua arte, gostaria de comentar aqui que gostaria que você adicionasse criticas nos teus próximos trabalhos, gostaria de criticá-los também, hahah. Até mais, e goodjob!
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moonlight311 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013
this is amazing
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :hug:
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Yagamiseven Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
LLooks good
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! ^^
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Ambercatlucky2 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Professional General Artist
lovely!
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :aww:
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Ambercatlucky2 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Professional General Artist
anytime!
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AquariusYaoi Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
*O* tao lindo!!! A pintura esta fabulosa :DDDDDDDD
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Obrigada! ^^
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DameOdessa Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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This splendid work has been featured in my journal [link] :heart:
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :hug:
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DameOdessa Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:huggle:
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Miss-Mae Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely gorgeous!
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :hug:
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AnimeSenpai Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Awesome
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :aww:
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AnimeSenpai Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thats alright
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Mistress-Denna Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
Oh my, so serene! I love it!
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :aww:
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StrawOnABerry Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I love this, you're amazing with digital art
it's an honor that you watched me :love: thanks a lot
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :hug:
But the pleasure's all mine ^^
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:iconzoalin:
zoalin Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Student Writer
wow pretty cool
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ^^
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Amaipetisu Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012   Digital Artist
You are only 16? So talented! This is such a lovely work full of details. Amazing!
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes :)
Thank you so much :aww: :heart:
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Vishw Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
When's the result of this?
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No idea :confused:
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:iconvishw:
Vishw Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol! That's so 'you' ;P

Btw, when can I get to see the finished version of that awesome Halloween wip you posted on FB? :D
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Is it? ;p

I'm working on it ^^ Trying to figure the lighting out, but slowly getting there :D
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Vishw Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Is it not :? Now I'm not sure! You haven't said 'you know me so well' in a while, so I dunno.. :confused:

You seem to be taking your time with this one.. are you planning to better your last best "one last call"? :D
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Geez, it was a rethorical question, don't take it always so seriously! :/

Nope, it's just working out worse ;p plus I postponed it to do the ZAP! piece and so on ^^;
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Vishw Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry, I'm not good with rhetorical questions! ^^; & I'm also bad at spotting if you're being serious or pulling my leg! :\

Okz! Hope you finish soon & we get to see it! :)
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I've noticed that! :| Well, I'll make sure to clearly let you know whether I'm joking or not ;)

I'm working on some commissions now, it'll take a while ^^; *me shamelessly postponing it again*
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Limelight-Night Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
Perfect colors :)
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :aww:
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FeloniusMonk Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love the colouring on this :)
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ^^
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Eeren Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I like the colors of this one!! Good job! :)
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :aww:
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LostInTheMorning Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:jawdrop:OH MY GOD THIS IS FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS TURNED OUT SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aha thank you so much!! :tighthug: :heart:
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LostInTheMorning Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:
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Shaori07 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WOW!:omfg: You finished it! Why i didn't saw this?:?
Its beautiful^^ The colors are so magical:aww: Amazing work my dear:tighthug:
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I did :la:

Thank you so much!! :tighthug::heart:
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CGShaffer Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Professional General Artist
Stunning work!!
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :heart:
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CGShaffer Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Professional General Artist
You're welcome! :D
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KittySib Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely and shiny!:D
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:iconvelnna:
Velnna Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :aww:
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KittySib Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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