People may find me slightly biased as this scene was for my novel, but it should only make my judgement harsher. To evoke emotions’ from a kiss can be hard, it can look soppy, lack passion and share no chemistry between the characters. Velnna has done exceptionally well. The tender look on Cherry’s face and the sharp jaw line on Auro leaves you wanting to watch those kips touch and lapse in love. The fact that you can’t see any clothes resembles a delicate, tender scene which reflects intimacy and makes you desire more.
The surrounding scene of the giant Lilly pad was very effective, not over complicated yet beautiful and covers the rest of their bodies, keeping the rest of moment personal and locked within the imagination.
You've managed to bring to life, what possibly was the hardest scene to write in the whole of the novel. You've united two hearts which have been burning with desire so beautifully. Without the additional of colour or emphasised patterns, just using a pencil and your creativity have composed something very rare and spectacular. Well done.
To evoke emotions’ from a kiss can be hard, it can look soppy, lack passion and share no chemistry between the characters.
Velnna has done exceptionally well.
The tender look on Cherry’s face and the sharp jaw line on Auro leaves you wanting to watch those kips touch and lapse in love. The fact that you can’t see any clothes resembles a delicate, tender scene which reflects intimacy and makes you desire more.
The surrounding scene of the giant Lilly pad was very effective, not over complicated yet beautiful and covers the rest of their bodies, keeping the rest of moment personal and locked within the imagination.
You've managed to bring to life, what possibly was the hardest scene to write in the whole of the novel. You've united two hearts which have been burning with desire so beautifully. Without the additional of colour or emphasised patterns, just using a pencil and your creativity have composed something very rare and spectacular.
Well done.
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